Added: Jan 23, 2008
From: ptownballa69
Duration: 4:59
Hamlet and Horatio happen upon their friend yorick and another tragic scene.
Channel: Education
Tags: act car crash death english gertrude hamlet horatio ophelia project scene shakespeare soliloquy speech
Rating: ( ratings) Views: 418 Comments: 5
GuapoBhutto Says:
Jan 23, 2008 - Your main actor wasn't reading or acknowledging the subtext of the dialogue, therefore leading to confusing and uninspired motions that made me want to either shoot myself in the knee for humiliating shakespear e's finest work or just fall asleep. You might want to tell your crew not to talk and/or make any sounds while the shoot is in progress. It just makes your film sound like it was made by a bunch of high school morons with no interest or respect for the work of one of our greatest poets.
GuapoBhutto Says:
Jan 23, 2008 - I'm not going to even get into the mistakes made in wardrobe. I'm not positive, but I'm pretty sure there was a continuity error leading every shot. Remembering where your hands were isn't a lot to ask...but i guess you did work with only women...
Zookman99 Says:
Jan 23, 2008 - you suck ptownballa69! ...and so does your video. thanks a lot
Hemostrat Says:
May 7, 2008 - Do you even know what that monologue is talking about?
GuapoBhutto Says:
Jan 23, 2008 - Ok ptownball69....let's start with the basics: PLEASE GOD tighten up the editing. Every single shot needs help. You even left shots in you meant to cut that showed up for only seconds. I know you can't control the weather, but you can at least work with it. You should of came already knowing your lines so you wouldn't have to spend so much time reading them while the sun went down leading to shots so dark even your actors ghostly skin couldn't be seen.